Thursday, April 28, 2011

Poem

Practice makes perfect in order to achieve
Although after practicing in the end you leave
Is it worth it, giving up everything you've got,
Rarely it is, but most times it's not

Pain and tears are part of the training,
But so is physical and mental draining,
What do you do after you succeed?
Move onto the next trick, until you are pleased

Broken legs and broken hearts,
Practice is where the problem starts,
Limp on back to the gym for more,
All to get an unfair score,

Finally up to your last nerve,
You leave to be treated as you deserved,
But where can you go after the game?
Nowhere, and you are the only one to blame.

4 comments:

dori07 said...

Very interesting poem...what is about specifically?

Asian08 said...

"Practice makes perfect in order to achieve
Although after practicing in the end you leave
Is it worth it, giving up everything you've got,
Rarely it is, but most times it's not"

Those lines are so good and very true! ^^ (: I really liked reading your poems, Sara!

ANSLEY PLAETZERS BLOG said...

I really liked your first poem. Good job!

kenzie evans said...

This is SUCH a good poem!!! I really enjoyed reading it. it has a really nice tone, and is both deep and meaningful. Nice work:)